A not so promising start.

I would just like to thank the five people who wrote in with their comments and suggestions for the Trick or Treat/ Truth or Dare story. I’m not sure wich title works better so i’ll just put them both down and decide later. Well i’m going to quickly try and answer your questions:

  • I actually have no idea how many times a woman can cum in one session.I once read a HP Fanfiction where Harry had to make Hermione climax 10 times in one day. She thought it was in possible but he proved her wrong (guess it had to happen one time lol).  JoanofArc (the young lady (that’s only my asumption based on the email name) responsible for requesting this story) had originally asked for 100 times but i thought that was a bit much (both in the realms of beleiveability and my writing skills) so 10 in an hour my alteration. 
  • Yes, Videl will be using a vibrator. But i have no idea how she is going to do it exactly. I’m thinking she masterbates first, then futa 18 (yes that was one of the main parts Joan wants, she was inspired by a Debt Repaied) joining in while Chichi fucks Gohan. Feeling like a third wheel, Bulma joins Videl and 18 untill Gohan and Chichi complete the Sixsome. 

Again thank you for all your suggestions and please keep them coming.

Now onto new bussiness.

I’ve started a new original shortstory. It’s somewhat more contempay than my usual stuff but it’ll be a nice change.

In other (more current) fanfcition news, I did have a few calls to forget the Futa VidelxPan (with some bulma thrown in) Commission in faviour of the above story, but lets be fair. The chap who commissioned this story is just as keen as you and he has been waiting longer lol. And of course it’s paid work. However i’m not so sure how  to start it, curtousy of a lot of ideas and my usual insucurity. For your viewing pleasure and my search for feedback here is the opening, (i’m expecting at least five comments because i know you’re out there now… lol just joking (or am i?)).

How have I come to this?
Lightning streaked across the blackened sky, scorching the overcast heavens with a brilliance that turned darkness into blue-white light and threw the canopy of dense black clouds into sharp relief. Not so much as flinching under before it’s fury, Videl numbly watched bolt stab the sky, the glare turning her ivory skin ghostly white against the lustrous curtain of raven hair spread out beneath her.
It had been Gohan’s idea to have a skylight in their bed room. He’d liked the idea of them being able to cuddle up together and look out at the stars and she’d been so surprised by his uncharacteristically romantic idea she’d agreed immediately.
Gohan. Just the thought of her husband was enough for guilt to claw the cold knot of ice in her stomach even tighter and she had the sensation of tears welling behind her eyes. Only she had no more tears to shed. She had already wept all those away.

Trick or Treat Story update…

Honestly, Im shocked. Five comments! That is the most responces i’ve had since i started this blog. Thanks eveyone.

I’m afraid the Futa Videl/Pan/Bulma story is still my first priority as it is a commission. Sorry.

Well as there has been so much intrest in the Trick or Treat story, here is what i’ve discussed the requester.

Ok, then the way i envision the story is Gohan and videl comeing home after dinner out, getting in the mod with a glass of wine, only to have the three older woman comeing round. They chat for while but when 18 comes back from a bathroom break, she reveals that she’s had a look around and found the sex game, that videl confesses to having bought the for valantines day just gone but they never got round to playing it. 18 and Bulma both insist they play, Gohan tries to talk them out of it but his slightly drunk mother tells him to lighten up and go with it.
They set the board game up and, the rules are that they sit in a circle and go round, taking a card that they must either do or direct to another player or players. If they refuse there is a forfit that they must do. As it’s Videl’s birthday, she goes first. She pulls a card that she directs to bulma, that is what is the best sex she has ever had. For Chichi’s turn she directs at gohan, he has to strip for the group. Next, bulma  tells 18 to undress chichi but without using her hands, she refuses so she has to do the forfit, which is masterbarte, that she does but doing so reveals her futa side. The group stare wide eye’d so she reveals it was done by dr gero. 18 then gets revenge by Videl striping Gohan in a lap dance, which she counters after  by having Chichi and Bulma make out and strip eachother. Then it’s Chichi’s turn and she does it herself, give Gohan a blow job. Bulma pulls the next card and tells videl she has to have 10 orgasims, Videl tries to refuse and the forfit is that if she doesn’t complete the 10 in a timelimit she’ll be the sex slave of the other players.
They all agree to move it to the bedroom so she’ll be more comfortable,uses her vibrator to masterbate but the sight gets the others so horny the others start playing with gohan. Videl begs for attention but instead chichi begins to eat her. When Gohan  joins in, mother and son share Videl  while Bulma and 18 playwith eachother before joining in.  Finaly Chichi and Bulma break off, leaving Gohan and 18 to DP videl. She cums for the 10 time just after the alarm sounds so she loses the contest.
 To be honest,I haven’t given the ending much thought. After her 10 orgasim, Videl will be on the brink of passing out when she hears 18 say ‘Awww such a pitty. Looks like you lose, slave.’ I suppose then it would fade out to the next morning when Videl wakes up to find herself naked but alone in bed with a collar around her neck and she goes into the main living area to find Gohan fucking his mother and Bulma,when 18 comes up behind her and  whispers ‘Good moning my pet.’ 
As i said before, i’m open to any suggestions for the dares. Also, given there has been so much interest in this story (ok five comments might be much by any stretch of the imagination but it’s the most this blog has ever had so lets not quible) I am giving somethought to commissioning a pic to go with it….


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MWhen Mina returns for her stepbrother’s 21st birthday, she thinks her days of lusting after him are over. Caught up in the heat and passion of the moment, she is stunned to find them back in bed together; their feelings clearly far from resolved. Haunted by her desire, and her growing appetite for , Mina now has another problem… she must head down a path of lust and desire; torn between the dark delights of the handsome bad boy down the street and her adorable stepbrother who has always been there for her. Can she confront the truth she has long tried to bury? How far will she go to save the one she wants, but knows she can never truly have?

A full length, 40,000+ word novel, Confessions is the stand-alone erotic drama from the Author of the sinfully delicious, Sweet Temptations Trilogy. Warning! It contains adult themes, harsh language, and graphic content, descriptions of intense sexual scenes, and dubcon (dubious consent) that might be triggers for some readers.

This is quite the erotic read, complete with various sexual pairings and groupings. If you’re looking for a book that includes some taboo topics, dirty talk and name-calling, this may be the coming-of-age erotic book for you! – http://geekynymph.com/book-review-confessions/

This is a taboo/forbidden read that is full of steamy pages and a incredible plot. This is definitely not for anyone under 18 as there are some highly charged sex scenes that are WOW! This is not the typical stepbrother story it’s so much more. – hellmouthsbookblogreviews.com

The plot was fresh and the sex scenes were definitely hot enough to melt my Kindle. – Lynn Cooper, author of The Dominant Seduction Series

This is one of those forbidden step-brother romances with an especially dark twist. I know I definitely didn’t see it going in the direction it went. Suspenseful? Uh, yea. Sexy? Absolutely. – alwayslovemesomebooks.blogspot.com

















A New Start

Well it is done then, Confessions is up  and on Pre-Order on Amazon, the only problem is it has been slapped with the adult filter and unless you have the exact web address, it won’t be found :(. I’m currently trying to get it removed, when it is done i will post the details as i’m not sure if i’ll have to take it down and then post it again to get normal service. Why is everything never simple.

Well to turn to new buissness, i’m ready to start my new project and i have no idea what it is. I know i’ve promised to start the final chapter to daay of confessions but atm that will have to be put on the weekend project list. My first project of choice is a DBZ Commission i’ve mentioned which involves a futa-videl. Not really my first choice of projects in general but commissions always have to have priority as they are both paid work. Of course that doesn leave weekends free but i have one or two more fanfics i want to turn into kindle books before i start anything new there. If the commissioner doesn’t wish to procced of coursen then i will be splitting my time between another futa commission and  the second chapter of Sweet Temptations. If anyone can tell me why futas are so popular at the moment then i’d like to know.

However i do have some news, i have recieved a new request. It basically involves GohanxVidel and just about every other Z Girl in a game of Truth and Dare. If anyone has requests for things they’d like to see i’m all ears and keen to have sugestions.

To be honest i’m not sure if i’m ready to return to writing, but i know if i don’t then i’m going to go nuts! I want to write but i’m not sure if i’m good enough or if my creativity is gone. However, that is the story of all writers so i’m just going to shut up and split my time between writing and reading. Maybe i’ll always be unsure of myself, lord knows my confidence is never helped by how quickly some writers can punch out 90,000 words. But then rome wasn’t built in a day and as i’ll probably never be able to give up my night job for writing, who cares aand on with the typing…